Thoughts on the love scene:
- Budgeted 1500 words. Wrote 3200. Not even a little sorry.
- Blew half an hour researching the various types of wax jobs. That was fun. Almost gave PJ the Martini before I came to my senses.
- The freaky nipple condition is legit, but I couldn’t seem to find a name for it. Blew another ten minutes researching that.
- Note to all men: those mountains of bedroom throw pillows aren’t completely useless.
- Beau telling PJ “this is gonna be so much better ’cause ya did” is seriously one of my favorite lines in the book.
- Ha! I knew that vanilla gelato reference was going to come in handy later in the book.